hellooo there,
i was looking at that awesome japanese photo at the bottom of my blog yesterday, just thinking about how much i would love to write a japanese story. and then, BAM! i came up with an idea. i think it might still need work, but, here it is. (ps, if you aren't really into sappy love/fantasy type stories, japanese or otherwise, you probably won't like this story. just a warning.)
Sakura is torn between two men. the first is Takiyami, the boy with the broken home & the beautiful soul. Sakura longs to be the one to save him, but he is constantly turning to other women, & she is sick of being the 'friend'. the second, Kyoto, is the typical bad boy with a cheeky grin & irresistable charm. she knows he is bad news, but she can't help thinking there could be something special bubbling underneath the surface.
she pines after both, not knowing which one she wants more, & even so, knowing, even if she did, would she be able to have him? she is driven mad with longing, until her geisha mentor decides to save her using what could only be called tough love. she casts a spell upon Sakura, so she knows what it's really like to feel invisible. now Sakura must find a way to break the spell.
well that's the plot. any suggestions will be greatly appreciated, if you feel there is anything in need of improvement. thanks.
jessss. (:
i was looking at that awesome japanese photo at the bottom of my blog yesterday, just thinking about how much i would love to write a japanese story. and then, BAM! i came up with an idea. i think it might still need work, but, here it is. (ps, if you aren't really into sappy love/fantasy type stories, japanese or otherwise, you probably won't like this story. just a warning.)
Sakura is torn between two men. the first is Takiyami, the boy with the broken home & the beautiful soul. Sakura longs to be the one to save him, but he is constantly turning to other women, & she is sick of being the 'friend'. the second, Kyoto, is the typical bad boy with a cheeky grin & irresistable charm. she knows he is bad news, but she can't help thinking there could be something special bubbling underneath the surface.
she pines after both, not knowing which one she wants more, & even so, knowing, even if she did, would she be able to have him? she is driven mad with longing, until her geisha mentor decides to save her using what could only be called tough love. she casts a spell upon Sakura, so she knows what it's really like to feel invisible. now Sakura must find a way to break the spell.
well that's the plot. any suggestions will be greatly appreciated, if you feel there is anything in need of improvement. thanks.
jessss. (:
Comments (4)
Hi Jessica! Your story idea sounds really cool - good luck with it. And I love the picture and quote you have at the bottom of your blog!
hey! thanks for the feedback. yeah i must say i'm quite a fan of japan. (:
Love your idea Jess. You should write it!
thanks Ben! i've already started, just hope i can keep up with it this time.